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This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week January 1st 2023 to January 7th 2023

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teeth

Ill comply, ill apologise, im fucking tired
I’ll hold your hand in mine, resigned, fingertips when i dont exist
Palm to palm on a good day, a lovers loss, no pilgrims kiss
A tragic play, no exit left.

Hospital selfies, WhatsApp messages
Secrets, silences, financial deposits, zero context
Feet in my mouth on designated public paths
My teeth, picket fences that need knocking down
Tonsils overbearing fools that cannot read the room
That weren’t invited anyhow.

Seven molars, roots like weeds
Curiosities
Photos of roadkill on disposable film
A mausoleum of moths and cuckoo bees
My rotten teeth in matchboxes my dad always set aside for me
A small kid, with a big mouth
Already half empty

Childish bubbles, slaughtered
Born from soap and water
Joy, a moment, nothing after
A blade of grass
A concrete corner
The banality where small things falter

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Bristol, UK.

Favorite Poets: eva h d, charles bukowski, sylvia plath, rupi kaur

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Comments

M4GG0TM3NT4L

M4GG0TM3NT4L

2 years 5 months ago

Woah

this is incredibly vivid!! the placement is also incredibly well done!! I just really like this poem, it resonates w/ me a little. good job dude!!!!!!!

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 5 months ago

Sometimes...

the little things build up to be big things. One never knows at the time, what will affect you in the future. Looking back on things that you never knew would catch up to you as a grown up, we become adults. Too bad that we can't figure that out as these things happen. Anyway, nice work in helping us see that. A good piece overall, and I hope that we will see happier work as you find yourself a home here. ~ Geezer.
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E E Kenny

E E Kenny

2 years 5 months ago

I've written a new poem,

I've written a new poem, shinies, reflecting on why I can't write about happy things, if you're interested! I'll keep trying though :)

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

hello,

I am interested...i say post it.

*hugs, Cat

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 5 months ago

hello,

the poem is edgy and creative. your words portray your emotions very well. thanks for sharing!

*hugs, Cat