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Oct 18, 2015
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.............................temperance inertia...............................
like a flow
the break away
dust
rattles of its heights
the hygiene touch
the delicate brush
and I
hiss an ember
duty bound
the call of its
master
the love of
a home thrift
disaster
comforted in its
gentle swell
the voice like
pleasure
the dull like
dell
soft as a prayer
encircling wall
into the static
and anger
here
waiting quiet
heat waves
in the drifts
for your wind
to blow across
my soul
and ignite
the fire
chase back
this dark
...
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
9 years 9 months ago
another landscape
a new conversation
a muse corporate
and corporeal
how we change each
other in the inter
between the selves
and self
the other
gentle she asks
shhh
she says
my words leaping
the stride putting
miles
did I ever touch
down
I listen to seether
she likes JB
what do you mean....
appropriate
finding meaning
and the search
for one
as two
esker the ponder.....:(
emeka ozurumba
9 years 8 months ago
wow ...
the land scape of description fits very invariably the theme and focus of attention you wove to the plot, very excellent condensation
Esker
9 years 8 months ago
Emeka
it does precipitate
from the cloud chamber
thoughts ideas
was reading your works the other day
must comment on them
our works are similar
!
thank U