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Tertiary tints:
An uncommon woman and a common man
Youthful, savvy, political partners in crime
Differing in creed but united in need to plan
A path to the top in record breaking time
Amoral obsession that would not be denied
With a slogan that would get the job done
Connived, survived and thrived as they plied
Their plans as “two for the price of one”.
Along the way came and went alliances
Promises, compromises, obligations
Dalliances, disagreements, disappearances
Reversals, reprisals and retractions
Resulting realization and realignment
Adversaries and critics were liquidated
Attainment did not lead to atonement
Collaterally targeted were eliminated
Past being trapped by lobby agent
After failed spousal electioneering
Personal and political disengagement
However comeuppance in the offing
About This Poem
Last Few Words: THE TELL-TALE HEART by Edgar Allan Poe is an apt analogy
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
chevyvent
6 years 10 months ago
Great reference you made a
Great reference you made a piece that makes you think really good mannerisms you enfluenced. I was in tears with the last stanza you have really captured my imagination. Stay close to the pen you have a reason for being in the changing of the season.
For example, " An uncommon woman and a common man
Youthful, savvy, political partners in crime
Differing in creed but united in need to plan"
words to live by.
OriginalRhyku
6 years 10 months ago
Chevyvent
Thanks. Yes comeuppance is coming for those who ruthlessly targeted and eliminated innocent victims who had no connection to the twisted designs of criminal cohorts.