alidzain

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Thank You

To all the people I've come to love

Heroes who keep me going all these years

Angels who shower me with hope and love

No words could express my gratitude, that's true

Kisses, hugs and prayers are all I have for you

You make me feel so blessed in this life

Only because I have you here, by my side

Until the day this life ends, my love for you never ends.......

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Just another try at something new..

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: singapore, SGP

Favorite Poets: Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Sarojini Naidu and friends in Neopoet.

Comments

Ian.T

11 years 4 months ago

Kalid

A beaut of a write, The challenge is in the title where you use the whole alphabet to start each line, but this one is great and a very well thought out write, take care, Yours Ian.T

alidzain

11 years 4 months ago

Thanks, Ian

for the visit and the comment.

Alid

Rula

11 years 4 months ago

khalid

Try to replace one of the two you (s) by the end of S1 and see if you like it more.
A lovely read.

alidzain

11 years 4 months ago

Hi Rula

I've edited it but I wonder what if I just end that verse with just gratitude instead of "that's true".

Alid

Knowledge is a gift, health is wealth....

raj

11 years 4 months ago

Alid

I see you are going places and discovering new ways to express yourself, like you have done in this Acrostic. I suggest you use "Advanced Formatting" feature which is in the drop down menu below "simple formatting" and make all first alphabets in each line "Bold". Well done Alid...you have tempted me to try out an acrostic some day...

Regards,.

wesley snow

11 years 4 months ago

I like it.

That's all.

alidzain

11 years 4 months ago

raj, make all first alphabets in bold?

how do you do that? I've changed it to advance format but still at a lost...

Alid

raj

11 years 4 months ago

Alid

Before I could, Rula has already explained to you how to do it...

Regards,

alidzain

11 years 4 months ago

i did but

for some reasons it doesn't work.:( I'll ask if my friends here might know how to do it.

Alid

raj

11 years 4 months ago

Alid

To all the people I've come to love

Heroes who keep me going all these years

Angels who shower me with hope and love

No words could express my gratitude, that's true

Kisses, hugs and prayers are all I have for you You make me feel so blessed in this

See I could do it as in above using Advance Formatting option which you already know. Let me try to explain step by step how I converted the T into bold T

1, Keep the cursor before T

2. Press Shift key and click on the other side of T, which will put the T in a black square

3. Now release the Shift Key and Press Ctrl key + B which will convert T to T

Try it now with one alphabet and once you are able to do it, do the same with other alphabets you want to make bold. Hope this helps