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May 28, 2022
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THERE FOR YOU
I wish you peace
on hectic days,
If it's dark and gloomy;
I hope you catch some rays.
If you ever feel sad,
I hope a smile appears,
I hope you conquer your
demons and face your fears.
I wish you courage
if you begin to doubt,
I want you to have it all;
never be without.
I never want you to
feel sorrow or pain,
Sunshine and blue skies
never see the rain.
I wish you the truth;
I hope you never hear a lie,
I want you too never
give up; always try.
I want your dreams and wishes
all to come true,
If you ever need me
I'm there for you.
TURBO 2021 ♥
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Candlewitch
3 years 1 month ago
hello Turbo,
your title is good it is reflected in the poem. your pacing is very good as the poem flows very smoothly. I liked the lines equally and could not choose favorites. Keep up the good work!
*hugs, Cat
turbo1904
3 years 1 month ago
There for you
Hello Cat, this was the first poem I wrote. I recently retired and divorced. It has been a rough couple of years. I so look forward to your comments. Thank you for your support, it means a lot.
Best Wishes,
Turbo1904
Candlewitch
3 years 1 month ago
dear Turbo,
thank you for your kindness, it put a smile on my face!
*hugs, Cat
Obadiah Grey
3 years 1 month ago
Its a good poem that made me
Its a good poem that made me feel peaceful and relaxed, well done!
A few grammatical errors perhaps and slight slippage in syntax but hey, Its poetry!
Cheers, Obi.
turbo1904
3 years 1 month ago
THERE FOR YOU
Thank you for the comment. My grammar is a little off key. I will deliver the message. Thanks again.
Best Wishes
Turbo1904