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Dec 07, 2020
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these crazy thoughts of mine
What a crazy day
yelling at people
getting it wrong
concerning things not real
disappointment took its toll
nobody anywhere
I'm on my own, in my world
these crazy thoughts of mine
an angel in disguise
a mediator, it's not as you see
crazy in real life, crazy online
these crazy thoughts of mine
no family or friends need me now
I'm moving on, my journey begins
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara Writes
4 years 6 months ago
hi teddy
Thanks for visiting and nope, I have 7 grandkids 1 on the way with their parents who don't need me in this world anymore. I'm on my spiritual journey now but I'm always available to them.
Geezer
4 years 6 months ago
You have...
plenty of emotion in this one. I don't see any criticism. This is very straight-forward and hits a person right between the eyes.
Very stark and sad. I hope that you don't really feel that bad. Cheer up!There must be some grandkids you can hug! They always make me feel better. ~ Geez.
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Barbara Writes
4 years 6 months ago
Hey Geez
thanks for visiting. No, I don't feel this bad anymore but it is an experience I've chosen to move past. I just popped this out of my head and submitted it yesterday.
Gracy
4 years 6 months ago
Dear Barbara. your poem is
Dear Barbara. your poem is sad, but I emphasize with you. My grandsons live far away, so I don't see much of them. Still, one always has poems, stories, books, etc., to write or read, plus all the daily stuff of life. I like the fact that you're starting on a spiritual journey.
Will return with more time, all the best, Gracy
Barbara Writes
4 years 6 months ago
thanks Gracy
glad you like it