They Call The Wind

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "They Call The Wind" presents a strong narrative and employs effective repetition to emphasize the theme. The repeated phrase "They call the wind" serves as a refrain, creating a rhythmic pattern that adds to the overall musicality of the poem.

The poem's structure is consistent, with each stanza containing four lines. This regularity contributes to the poem's rhythm and flow. However, the rhyme scheme varies between stanzas, which may disrupt the reader's expectations. Consistency in rhyme scheme could enhance the poem's musicality and coherence.

The poem effectively uses imagery to convey its themes. Phrases such as "Tortured souls with countless scars," "The fearful whispers creeping near," and "Men and women paid a high price" paint vivid pictures and evoke strong emotions. However, the metaphor "They pulled out peace from every crack" could be clarified or expanded upon to ensure the reader fully understands its meaning.

The poem's language is generally clear and accessible, but some phrases may benefit from further explanation or development. For instance, the phrase "Chase out the mice" is somewhat ambiguous. Providing more context or clarification could enhance the poem's overall clarity and impact.

The poem's themes of struggle, resilience, and hope are effectively conveyed through its narrative and imagery. However, the poem could benefit from further exploration of these themes. For example, the poem could delve deeper into the experiences and emotions of the "men and women" who "paid a high price," providing a more nuanced portrayal of their struggles and resilience.

Overall, the poem displays strong narrative and thematic elements, effective use of repetition and imagery, and a consistent structure. With further development of its metaphors, clarification of ambiguous phrases, and deeper exploration of its themes, the poem could be further enhanced.

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beatifically lyrical while giving the reader a whopping Kick! I love it!! My favorite lines are:

They call the wind—it answered back,
Men whose dignity stayed on track,
They pulled out peace from every crack,
Where hope takes flight and won’t turn back.

And still winds hum, for all in need.

thanks for this my beautiful friend! much love, Cat xxx

Hi Rula, this is powerful and your refrains add weight to the structure of your poem. Your message comes through clearly and with force and I agree with Cat, that final stanza is fantastic. Well done, Ruby xx

of your work, it seems very well thought out.
I can't think of anyone else, who can take tragedy and dress it up as well as you do, to give us all a lesson. Thank you, Rula. -Geez.
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Hello, Rula,
Beautiful, and so dignified. Felt every word.
Lxxx

no more to say, Rula

Thomas

I am so glad your poem won the contest. It is so incredible! Congratulations!

your Candle

Hello Rula, your poem is indicattive of the spirit within the woman I met long ago in a different and sorely missed forum. There is a definitve difference in your use of Nglish that pleases me to no end. I saw the potential within you then and you have continued to excell as I knew you would. Congrats doll, you should be proud of yourelf and your efforts.
I havs become more reclusive after the loss of Rdub and GG and rarely write or post anywhere yet miss the art and those I have met along the way. You have always remained in my heart and mind as someone special.
A bit "Indi-cisive" about participating still I shall come again soon to say hello and hopefully catch more of your words...
Ciao

For me the Wind remains constant even when it’s voice and pitch and song may vary, in a desert, on the sea, by streams and rivers, my mountains, forests, and cityscapes. You have captured its essence quite beautifully :)