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lovedly
lovedly
Jul 02, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

THEY TOLD ME

God will descend to check your well being
So I went to the CHILDREN'S mass gathering

There he had come
just like any human
Smiled at me

THEN SENT MY MIND REELING

See docs told you smile till you die
you didn't listen so I came just to give you
oh silly one

one more chance
Go with kids dance
see me again after I've gone

Where he vanished in the crowd

About This Poem

Last Few Words: They say HE exists but still can't believe it

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years ago

dear lovedly,

you are not alone. I cannot believe it either! good poem. I like where your head is at...

*love, Cat

lovedly

lovedly

3 years ago

THANKS CATS

A strange occurrence happened
I composed this one thanks

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

3 years ago

Strange happenings

I’m not sure about god or any of that but…I know there’s magic and messages and if you’re looking around with the right lenses you see them everywhere. Great work.

Tim