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Jan 24, 2023
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Things Missing...?
-I write of things that interest me,
-About the 'cards' that I've been 'dealt'.
-But worry that some doing so,
-Show need of psychiatric help...
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
2 years 9 months ago
hello uncopied writer,
yep, most do, including me!
*well met, Cat
Geezer
2 years 9 months ago
Nice one...
I'm not the limerest that some are here
so, I can't say hooray
But it sounds like a limerick
that I have heard
somewhere along the way
I'll guess it's good, and I'm hoping so
but I don't know
and I want one with my beer
~ Geezer.
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Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 9 months ago
This is my psychiatric help
But yeah you’ll find yourself exposing some layers that is for certain. I ask this question, are you really writing for others? I’m not. My ego likes to be told what I write is good. It doesn’t get bruised very easily with criticism because I need the outlet and I know it’s a healthy coping mechanism.
We are all in need of some therapy friend,
I truly believe this.
Tim