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thorn of rose

your poem reminds me of
the rose that I once was

who ever tried to prick me wrongly
I pushed ahead my thorn

whosoever loved me
I lay bare all with which I was born

my petals
no resistance
till another rose like me was born

The guys went forlorn
as many came over to my fertilizing lawn..
when many more colourful roses were born
morn after morn

sad so many continued to be torn
mans world they say
why were you a gal born?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geremia

Geremia

10 years 4 months ago

Poignant, Tender hearts are

Poignant, Tender hearts are vulnerable and are hurt easily because they give sincerely all of themselves. Well done.

joe

lovedly

lovedly

10 years 4 months ago

so kind of you raj

to have come my way
and sprinkled water
so that many roses
live love and stay

alidzain

alidzain

10 years 4 months ago

loved

I'm just saying I agree with raj and geremia, that's all. There's 3 of us who agree with each other. 3 in agreement. get it?

Alid