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those precious moments

those precious moments we search for
in the far recesses of our warped minds
we keep searching for solace,
as we leave time behind

and

march towards a stage
where rage

is the order of the day

and
page by page
we recall those very moments tall
we wish to time and again recall
but moments of momentum
are all so very few
we all love memories
how so ever old or new

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

sueb

12 years 5 months ago

yes precious memories much

yes precious memories much enjoyed cheers x

loved

12 years 5 months ago

sueb so kind of you

I must rather ought to
read you too
shall do

Frenchf

12 years 5 months ago

Lovely

Words. Thank you

loved

12 years 5 months ago

of yours that resonates with me. [Probably because I'm old and need my memories]. I particularly liked the lines;
"We recall those very moments tall
we wish to time and again recall
but moments of momentum
are all so very few
we all love memories
how so ever old or new"

~ Gee

loved

12 years 5 months ago

it's indeed an honour that

you have found reason enough
to traverse on my page
old we all are too in mind
and when one is blue..
and
so I have to thank you...

Roscoe Lane

12 years 5 months ago

Yes we,

Yes we, do and this poem will be remembered by whoever reads it, great poem. Regards Roscoe...

loved

12 years 5 months ago

so kind of you Roscoe

to say so
regards

Ian.T

12 years 5 months ago

Loved

This piece is of sadness where a feeling held of disappointment with life's gains, or course has not been kind.
We owe it to ourselves to grow old with dignity and the love of what we made of our lives.
Show me a person that can say I lived my life to all its values and well I will show you a liar..
A good write Loved and if you can see what you have written inside then you need to shake your values LOL...
Yours, with a load of spare unconditional love, Ian.T

loved

12 years 5 months ago

lololololololololssssssssssss

A good write Loved
and if you can see what you have written inside

then you need to shake your values .....LOL. hahahahaaa
tanxaaaaaaaaaaaa.