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Jul 06, 2014
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a thought in flight
a thought in flight pauses
on its panting path
to touch a pensive mind
the rushing notion
defies the mocking ripples
of many words' estuary
cascades vehemently along
till it ponds in solitude
lost in the obscurity
of a verbal world
the thought slowly turns
into a crafty alphabet
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
11 years ago
Gorgeously crafted
and thoughtful piece.
You are a master word-crafter, sir.
My only crit perhaps shows in the stumble in my reading.
perhaps
the thought turns slowly
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nokros
11 years ago
thanx
for dropping by Jess... appreciate.