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AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
Dec 19, 2014 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

THOUGHTS

IT WAS IN YOUR EYES
LAST NIGHT I THOUGHT ABOUT YOU
I CAN NOT DENY IT BUT YES
YOU MAKE ME HAPPY

A DAY GOES BY AND I ASK WHERE ARE YOU
A ROCK OF A SOFT SPOT IS WHAT YOU ARE
YOU ARE THE AWESOME WEATHER EVERYONE LOVES
WHAT DO YOU TO BE IN ME?
FRIENDSHIP HAS A BOND BUT NOT LIKE THIS
THE FEELING YOU GIVE ME IS PLEASURE
INSIDE YOU BREAK ME UP

IF ONLY I COULD SEE THE FUTURE
I WOULD OPEN IT AND PUT YOU IN IT
YOU ARE A PLACE BEYOND WONDERLAND
I CALL BY A NAME

YOU WANT IT TO BE GREAT
YOU WANT TO HELP ME
BUT MY HEATS IS NOT FOR HELP
MY THOUGHTS ARE ALL ON YOU

by:AMOGELANG

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: LEPHALALE, ZAF

Favorite Poets: MAYA ANGELOU

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

10 years 7 months ago

Wonderful poem Amogelang

Poetry is best READ when Not written in all caps.
Though a beautiful poem It like shouting and screaming it from the mountaintop to the young lady at the bottom of the Grand Canyon looking up at you with a smile bc she heard you loud and clear.
Welcome to neopoet. I hope to read more of your romantic love poems.

Esker

Esker

10 years 6 months ago

different mind tract

like it...
some concepts were different in initial read
but eventually thinking about this
it will find a meaning in my old noodle..
people are determined to see through
Love is not an easy game..
like playing a game of hard contact sport
of unicycle...that dont come easy..
bumps and lumps

other then the loud caps
removal i like this poem also!

thank you