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Aug 21, 2022
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THOUGHTS TIMELY UNFURLED
When my thoughts unfurl
and
my deaf ears stand up
I wonder if I'm a pup
When shooting stars shriek
across the sky
are they for real
light sparse
no fire
If I'm always wondering
about you
and
you seem to dote me
am I then
the only true me
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
2 years 10 months ago
That last question
only you can answer, and I say, YES, you are a pup!
Thomas
lovedly
2 years 10 months ago
ha ha
pup puppy thankee