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Apr 28, 2025
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thread-diving
people are our real legacy;
one day sure, entire poems
shall have been forgotten,
while remains a phrase or
a feeling drawn from wells
deeper than memory can reach,
or device can retrieve much like
thread-diving as we scamper for
posts buried by traffic and flood posters…
follow, subscribe, or friend buttons
can only do so much
so we hang on to what we have
and hold dear, today saving
each precious moment
if bookmarked sentiments are promises
all will be well -we’ll boldly breathe again
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
2 months 2 weeks ago
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Frederick Kesner
2 months 2 weeks ago
With you, it’s much like
With you, it’s much like throwing the dice in a casino!