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Jan 22, 2025
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Threats Toward A Heroic Help
Is there a doctor in the house
Tom and Jerry get the mouse
Through each pilgrim centered flow
The harm for those who stayed home from school
Avoiding overtime is not cool
Those per a chance at a glance
Many of us lost faith in the judicial system
Trying to become the voice
Listen to the Albatross as they fly by
The socialite who kindly gets on fire
Proned to help the folly
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Lots of help towards hope to trust
Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
neopoet
5 months ago
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
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mark
4 months 2 weeks ago
Hello TOP
This is a non-sensical kind of write. I can understand AI avoiding it. It is a lot of lines with no theme that I can see. I do not understand the connection or the reasoning behind it. It is not very logical. Just a lot of passing thoughts with no connection. Try putting some logic to your next one.
Best,
Mark