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Nov 16, 2023
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Three Sentence Breakup
You were content knowing someone
would be there with you in the morning.
I found calm in knowing
it would have to end
between misplaced hearts.
Cinders burning without flame.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: The experience that inspired this was not nearly as short - LOL!
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
RoseBlack
1 year 8 months ago
The end of a relationship
Sometimes there is peace and relief when it ends. This is a simple write that sums up those feelings beautifully. Well done.
Michael Anthony
1 year 8 months ago
Exactly that RB - thank you.
Exactly that RB - thank you.
Best
Lavender
1 year 8 months ago
Three Sentence Breakup
Hello, Michael,
Wow...could almost be a one sentence breakup. "Cinders burning without flame." Great poetry!
Thank you!
L
Michael Anthony
1 year 8 months ago
Always appreciate your visits
Always appreciate your visits L!
Best
Lavender
1 year 8 months ago
Such a pleasure
to read your work.
L