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Dec 11, 2010
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Thy Voice May!
Thy Voice May!
If these be
Thy kind words
Of earnest poetic ecstasy
Rise along with the Phoenix
And abide with me
Of that I’m certain
God shall return thy voice to thee.
You shall in time walk
Along with me
But by then
I would be standing isolated
At the threshold of eternity
From where no man
Can ever return
Know this ye.
For I continue to be
A naïve passer by
Retain your love for some one else
I am only a finger
To help erase strife
From the doldrums of life
We shall have to traverse
My fanciful ideas
Only in poems
I can triumphantly rehearse.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
loved
14 years 7 months ago
I MADE TWO TOPS TODAY
ONE
this one
as you say
and the other one
on Triond
another friend like you
did display .
THANKS TO BOTH OF YOU YOU MAKE MY DAY
hence this small one>>>>>>>>>>>>
There is no way
There’s no way now
To know
How many have
Glossed thy way
But those who comment
Take the cake
For they alone
Can a happy day make?
So if you
Read and comment
As you always do
I shall be Yenti
Grateful to you
weirdelf
10 years 6 months ago
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lovedly
10 years 6 months ago
hope someone will comment on this too
hello esker are you around
loved /lovedly