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On tide slowing time.
Webbing the worlds of threading tides
we watched as the rocks exploded
with a thousand shards of diamonds
ignition by virtue of a sun ripe sky
You sat on rocks, I pondered pools
the blue green azure, pure jewels
of millennia formed, layered and hewn
rocks the might of sea could not belie
All the sun day long, I wished
that this would last an eternity
and the sea would blast, and the sea
would seethe and sigh, while all above us
endless light, where birds climbed
If ever a day could outlast time
I wished this day would slow
and past, future, sea, sunshine
and you on the sweet damp sand
Forever mine.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: A portrait of a day, which was a welcome break on the east coast of Tasmania.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
scribbler
6 years 9 months ago
hello
This captures well one of those days we wish would never end.......stan
vandiemenspeak
6 years 8 months ago
Thanks Stan..
Certainly was a special day.
Cheers.
Chris.
IRiz
6 years 8 months ago
Hello dear V.
Hello dear V.
Your poem is a wonderful treat this gloomy morning. It brings so much sun and spray, love and dream. It is beautiful. Thank you.
vandiemenspeak
6 years 8 months ago
Thanks IRiz
Glad it could bring in some sunshine for you! Beautiful spot on the Tasmanian east coast.
Take care,
Chris.
IRiz
6 years 8 months ago
My pleasure!
My pleasure!