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TIEING UP HER SHOES

thumps down
her packsack on
the pink phone
in a hurry
leaving home
I did everything
tried to love
but the fires
were larger
the ash consumed
destruction violence
her playground then

a wave and gone
not even a look

Love is a pain
a slap
the rains
that fall cold and
steady
seeping
like the cold
that will blow
stabbing
the beauty haunted
foreboding
exhalted

nothing will break
this hold
this spell
I carry it
like a broken
treasure
the last of
any known
pleasure

...

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Geezer

Geezer

9 years 8 months ago

You made...

me feel the emotion as you usually do. Though we may move on, we never forget our loves. ~ Gee

Rula

Rula

9 years 8 months ago

really

Loved the title. Very descriptive.