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Jan 27, 2021
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Time
Mystery in a circle of sixty,
You are man’s greatest obsession.
In unseen track you fly,
Lifting light and letting heavy crawl.
Undoubtedly present in every century,
In seconds, minutes and hours,
You turn today to yesterday and tomorrow to now.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
4 years 5 months ago
Time
Hello, Oriii,
What a stunning piece. Mysterious and thoughtful, but so obvious and significant. Really like this.
Thank you!
L
I_am_Oriii
4 years 5 months ago
Thank you Lavender I really
Thank you Lavender I really appreciate your thought
I_am_Oriii
4 years 5 months ago
Thank you Teddy. I'm excited
Thank you Teddy. I'm excited you find it stunning.
chima ononogbu
4 years 5 months ago
Beautiful piece Ori
The piece takes one deep into self. So nice. Thanks.
I_am_Oriii
4 years 4 months ago
I appreciate
Thank you so much for your thought and advice I do appreciate
Geezer
4 years 5 months ago
I like...
your observations on time! I especially enjoyed: "Mystery in a circle of sixty." It sounds so "mysterious!" ~ Geezer.
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I_am_Oriii
4 years 4 months ago
Thanks
Thank you Geezer I am glad u find the poem catchy and mysterious
I_am_Oriii
4 years 1 month ago
Wow I'm so glad you thought
Wow I'm so glad you thought of that exceptional movie LUCY while reading my piece... Thank you