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Sep 28, 2022
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TIME AND SUN ARE GODS for ALL (A REVISION)
you must know
SUN IS ENERGY GOD
No human can do anything
since ages gone
ages to go
EARTH will have
BIGWIGS
so many have come and gone
now we have AC's
what else to cool off
fruits and trees
juices and produces
we had all overflowing then
had lesser population
now we have samples to see
leeches peaches
later may be perfumes
like essences mostly
still rich will enjoy bubbly' s
CHAMPAGNE
we red or white wine
Lesson learnt
pass time
pray sun comes each day
gives free VIT D to all
KING QUEEN TALL AND SMALL
THANK THE POETS
et al
Hope it's better now
Gee
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 9 months ago
I am not sure...
what your intention was in this write and cannot give a reason other than the context seems garbled and maybe a bit unsure of that intent. ~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 9 months ago
This poem was just off the cuff
created on some poets despair
why top guys are not controlling GLOBAL WARMING
etc abstract
so it appears mine to you GEE May skip.....