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lovedly
lovedly
Jun 27, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

TIME EMERGES FROM MY ARCHIVES

Value Time
Time is that something
man has created
by inventing a clock
to track the motion
of the sun

but all of us
fall short of it mostly
we all simply
whine, go here and there
to dance and dine
then we define
time yours you spent
money mine

now for your smaller pleasures
I have none
I am leaving
for you I have
just no more of my
invaluable time

About This Poem

Last Few Words: So many poems discovered today virgins still

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Jackweb

Jackweb

3 years ago

Yes ..

for sure, time is truly what we fall short of! Despite that man invented it as a clock for creating time of his own yet we don't purposely maintain it to a standard.

So, we should manage our time effectively and create a life time schedule.

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

3 years ago

dearest lovedly...

Time is something that eludes me, I'm always losing track of it! I really liked these lines:

Value Time
Time is that something
man has created
by inventing a clock
to track the motion
of the sun

and

now for your smaller pleasures
I have none
I am leaving
for you I have
just no more of my
invaluable time

my dearest lovedly, you have developed into a philosopher!

* hugs, Cat