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Mar 14, 2015
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Time For A New Vehicle
It's time for a new vehicle
Click, click, bang, bang it's a clunker
The struts and ball bearings clicking
It's a nightmare driving this car.
Not knowing when I'll be stranded
It's time for a new vehicle
Never trust family mechanics
They just might take you for granted.
Finally have deed and title
Five years of payments, paid in full
It's time for a new vehicle
My Aveo is a clunker.
Why? Because a car murderer
Did not properly change my oil
Massive oil leak about kill me
It's time for a new vehicle.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
wesley snow
10 years 4 months ago
You are on a roll.
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Barbara Writes
10 years 4 months ago
Wes
Thanks for reading and commenting. Yea I'm on a roll.
Esker
10 years 4 months ago
You write well....
Always a frolick even of the ordinary.
Thank You Barbara Writes!
Barbara Writes
10 years 4 months ago
Thanks esker
I appreciate the read and comment. Glad you think it's well written. I'm learning a lot from the workshops and contest.