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Nov 13, 2014
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time travel eh!
TIME TRAVEL
They, meaning
WE humans, collectively
Finally reached the comet
a decade of flying in space
what precision mind can trace
okay lace
do let me know
which GOD!
helped them
in this race
If silence is gold
then GOD
too has become old
move along with times
pray
scientifically
if one still may
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
10 years 8 months ago
Did we Plant Gods flag on our precious little snowball...
Earth should have a flag....but we have countries
instead...Maybe a corporate Logo....free samples..
it is marvelous to think of what we can do with
all the time to tinker....along with all the calamity
we do here to earth...
I must say Loved that you take on the issue
with gusto though!
Never obscure even in your obscurites...
Thank You!
lovedly
10 years 8 months ago
if only
Esker Sir,
we had met earlier
Ian.T
10 years 8 months ago
Loved
A fun write, no need to bring God into it, as the little miracle that settled on the comet so God , both are man made to keep us all in line as my acrostic will say:-
Great
Overall
Decision
What with computers now and the ability of man that uses them we will soon be out there looking back thinking why did we wander so..
Yours, Ian