Tin Heart

throw back the velvet glade
you need no key
the eyes
fire
shinning like the flash
on your sleeve

pick locks
and stop watch

memories buried
like a funeral cairn
I cant lock you
out not ever

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

loved

14 years 5 months ago

SO BEAUTIFUL

So Beautiful

I saw your comment
Somewhere on some of my poem
I couldn't locate it
Nor your name
I wanted to thank thee
Oh what a shame,
So very much belated
I don't deserve to be
In this poetic game
All other the poets
Will agree with thee
Not me

Esker

14 years 5 months ago

Re Borrowed title

I dont remember the old poem
this one is much shorter I think
Thank you for the comments