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Nov 28, 2020
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tipped into the tides of time
You are tipped into
the tides of time
To where you
And the soulless
Sand are washed
Upon this lonesome land
Desperately
hoping for a
wholesome
Hand to hold
and a flawless
friendly
face that
Beckons you
into its warm
embrace .
But nothing
lasts forever .
Yet the
only thing
That lives on
is the endless
Sea of
Mermory.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dandini
4 years 7 months ago
I think a few notes might
I think a few notes might help clarify what you mean as I am PUZZLED by this one.
Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Thank you
We are tipped into earth wanting comfort that will last forever but nothing lasts. So the only thing that comforts you are the memories
And thank you
Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Thank you