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Oct 28, 2018
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tips n toes
a brush and paint
color tips and toes
to reflect the moods
but it's winter
mittens and socks
keep them in wraps
snow capped hills
await the summer
to reveal their charm
but winter's too long a wait
for toes to curl, and
tips to leave their mark_
July and August
edge out the rest
to welcome joy
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
IRiz
6 years 8 months ago
I think I remember recently
I think I remember recently you wrote something about mittens and socks, is it the same poem?
raj
6 years 8 months ago
Hi IRiz
thanks for the read...yes I did use mittens and red noses in another one...not mittens and socks
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