Titles Workshop

but I keep tripping up in the last verse of the fourth stanza...
would
'but never I'll forget that graced design'
or 'but never will I forget that graced design'
work for you?

lo - I do suck at titles Wes ... perhaps
the descant of the storm
???

love judy
xxx

How about "Song Of The Fey"

Alid

A title for this one could just be:- "Lament" this would encompass all the ways of hearing something that gave you those feelings of distant shores and pipes to yen for,
Yours Ian..

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In memory sleeps

wow I don't know how many times I have read this poem
it is just sad but beautiful

liked it

And that last line.....might try faeries flee instead of faery flees........stan

good use of meaning to word imagery, i see that Valhalla coming

I believe no one knows better than the author what are his intentions when he composed the piece, hence comes the title whether before or after writing the poem.

I Like single word titles and this one fits the poem well in my opinion.......stan

"Jane" by John Masefield.
Your vision was tainted by your upbringing.

Cognitive Dissonance,
Damn and here was me thinking in four letter words, now there is a real conflict of attitudes to poetry
You educated poets are making me uncomfortable, so do we try to alter one side’s attitude.
So that we can restore a balance on this site with this workshop.
You see if you are going to throw long words and forms at me causing me a great discomfort, what do I do to correct this problem.
Can I refer to my inner self and hold all the attitudes and ways of everyone in a form of harmony so that there is no strife within Neopoet, avoiding all forms of disharmony or dissonance.
I remember a man called Festinger who came out with a theory that the attitudes may change because of the factors within a person.
I think that we must seek consistency in our ways of producing poetry, where the differences of any situation is inconsistent.
So all this means is that we should agree to disagree and get on with writing our own style of poetry
Cognitive dissonance through forced compliance of our behaviour cannot be attained,
So let’s cut the crap and long words and learn to get on with each other.
Good that's today sermon, love you both and hope to see improved writings from you both in critique and poetry from now on,
Yours loving you both,
Sparrow

in poetry are often denigrated if too many are asked. But isn't one thing poetry supposed to do is make people think? And a well asked question stated within the right poem can make a person think a lot. .........stan