Today I feel

Today I feel a life has been wasted
in timeless talk (with) those unknown
many times my free style they've tasted
of a poet known(unknown) wanting to be reknown

so now I shall eat only popcorn
till Stan does finally on Neo return
and another fresh day is born
as I wouldn't (appreciate) my fingers to burn

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

scribbler

7 years 2 months ago

LOL

Well, I'm not fully back but I'm not as far away as I once was. So heat the butter for the pop corn......stan

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

surely

kick the knee
and
come over here
for pops corns
Stan our poetic
neo -new
deer
YOUR POETRY ALL
WILL BEAR
HOPE YOU HEAR
LOL
lol
Lo L

raj

7 years 2 months ago

I think the first stanza was

I think the first stanza was good but you lost your way after that...
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lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

yeah thanks raj

u r right
I wasn't in mood
nor bright
so in composing it
I gave up delight
how right

soonly
I'd get it outta sight

and as and when I appear bright

u r right
I wasn't in mood
nor bright
so in composing it
I gave up delight
how right

soonly
I'd get it outta
all sight