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Jun 30, 2021
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Today I Want To
Today I want to
compose a fresh poem
out of this world
no one has ever here
do you at least hear
It will not be of herd mentality
nor out of the lonely sentimentality
from woods
where once greater
(though accepted later)
Statue poets stood
I would
maybe could or should
I should
rest tomorrow continue I would
If poets confirm I need to
Else let me relax in the slumber of time
where I always stand in the oblivion of chime
now not in front but behind
as it's going to be a one
long gone time
let me think and now mime
there is left but little time
really and truly sublime
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Triskelion
4 years ago
It is in
looking outward that we find ourselves, lovedly. Your muse is everywhere.
"Else let me relax in the slumber of time" is a really effective line.
Thomas
lovedly
4 years ago
let me relax in the slumber of time
Let me TRISK
THANX
Geezer
4 years ago
Yeah...
let him relax! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years ago
realaxing
lol
Triskelion
4 years ago
Aaaahhh
...the slumber of time...it's like sitting on a floaty chair in the Mediterranean...
Thomas
lovedly
4 years ago
Thanks Thomas
Floating on a curved half boat kind like the VIKINGS lol