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Aug 06, 2022
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Today there's a burning fire...within me
Today there is a burning fire within me
to compose a newer kind of poetry
that ignites infallible minds of humanity
such a kind of poetry
where two beloveds
face one another
as one smiles
balloons of kisses fly
crowds in great abandon....
hide behind a veil of time
no clouds are needed
all want an audience blind
so be it my way to say
stay
do read my desires
once in a way...
have an exotic night or day
where ever you are...
you may...
this is my thought for today
About This Poem
Last Few Words: O beloveds
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dystopia
2 years 11 months ago
Hi! I think this is
Hi! I think this is definitely one of my favourites that you have written. I find with this one, the meter is structured in such a way that helps me to get into the rhythm of the poem!!! I like this new style of poetry you have picked up and I and excited to see the poems you write next!
lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
all d best
DYS