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Oct 12, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 9th to October 15th 2022
Toll Collector
Grief never seems to care
about the currency I have,
be it pictures, memories, guilt or sorrow
It’s always been willing to work
with the materials at hand,
and accepts any and all
in payment for its’ services
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Grief makes yet another visit to my thoughts...
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 9 months ago
This sums it up...
I wouldn't try to say it better! Not a thing to change or anything more to say. ~ Geez.
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Michael Anthony
2 years 9 months ago
Thank you Geez!
Thank you Geez!
Lavender
2 years 9 months ago
Toll Collector
Hello, Michael,
Perfectly stated. Not only visiting your thoughts, but it feels like your heart, as well.
L
Michael Anthony
2 years 9 months ago
Appreciate the visit L -
Appreciate the visit L - thank you!
Best
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 9 months ago
Good title
Excellent in fact.
Tim
Michael Anthony
2 years 9 months ago
Thanks Tim! Best
Thanks Tim!
Best
Jackweb
2 years 9 months ago
Nice theme!
Majestic flight of feather. A light read.
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Michael Anthony
2 years 9 months ago
Thanks for stopping by JW!
Thanks for stopping by JW!
Cheers