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Tomfoolery

Sometimes I get angry at my heart
for all the foolishness it has gotten me into.
It seems to have never been afraid of folly.

It reminds me of meeting you at that café,
my silly gift in hand before you took mine in yours.

This Spring afternoon, many years later,
with a bright sun working hard, I watch you
attentively watering the plants in our yard,
indebted to foolishness and all it has given me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Lavender

Lavender

6 months 1 week ago

Tomfoolery

Hello, Michael,
So lovely. It speaks sweetly of blessings and gratitude toward love and companionship.
Thank you!
L
Love that tiny revision - soooo smooth. :)

mark

mark

6 months 1 week ago

Touching

I bet she loved it,
Mark