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Jan 09, 2025
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Tomfoolery
Sometimes I get angry at my heart
for all the foolishness it has gotten me into.
It seems to have never been afraid of folly.
It reminds me of meeting you at that café,
my silly gift in hand before you took mine in yours.
This Spring afternoon, many years later,
with a bright sun working hard, I watch you
attentively watering the plants in our yard,
indebted to foolishness and all it has given me
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Lavender
6 months 1 week ago
Tomfoolery
Hello, Michael,
So lovely. It speaks sweetly of blessings and gratitude toward love and companionship.
Thank you!
L
Love that tiny revision - soooo smooth. :)
Michael Anthony
6 months ago
Wasn't sure about the edit,
Wasn't sure about the edit, but looks like it was the right move - thank you!
Best
mark
6 months 1 week ago
Touching
I bet she loved it,
Mark
Michael Anthony
6 months ago
She did! Thank you Mark, and
She did! Thank you Mark, and I hope you are well amigo!
Best
Ray Miller
6 months 1 week ago
Tomfoolery
Enjoyed the read, very sweet.
Michael Anthony
6 months ago
Appreciate you stopping by
Appreciate you stopping by Ray!
Best