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Feb 06, 2023
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Tomorrow Is Another Day
Tomorrow I'll repent of all my sins
and write away a new history
I shall quit all the caffeines
and take a good care of poor me.
I'll cut down on the junkie foods
I won't keep awake till the wee hours
I'll try out more green stuffs and fruits
to nourish with super powers
I won't break the traffic rules
or bully anyone on my way
I won't quibble or fuss with fools
tomorrow is another day.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Jackweb
2 years 4 months ago
Nice resolution
I believe this was coming from a repented soul. Getting excess caffeine out of your system is just the decision you have just taken. May it truly work out for you.
Too much intake of stuffs leads to undisciplined life. I honestly believe, a good state of mind would lead to self control and obedience.
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Rula
2 years 4 months ago
JackWeb
Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment.
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
Tomorrow Is Another Day
Hello, Rula,
Very clever take on the contest theme. I really enjoy it all, but the second to the last line is the best!
Well done!
L
Rula
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you sweet Lavender
Iam so happy you like it. I put effort in this as I wasn't really in the mood to write.
Much appreciate yourind comment.and that line you pointed? I like it too :)
RoseBlack
2 years 4 months ago
The resolve to do better
I love what you did with the theme to this challenge. Every day is a chance to start over and be better than the one before! Thank you for the reminder! Well done!
Rula
2 years 4 months ago
Dearest Carrie
Your kind words are so much appreciated.
I am writing these days only when challanged.
Hope my muse to wake up soon.
Thank you dear.
lovedly
2 years 4 months ago
Did you not know
tomorrow never comes but when it does its another today and today is buried as a gone by yesterday Now repeat after me you may have a good day
Rula
2 years 4 months ago
Dear Lovedly
That is a really clever comment that I trasure.
I shall repeat quite often and wish you the same
Take care.
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 4 months ago
Everyday some absurdity will present itself
Be done with it and move on. Short and organized. Totally agree with Jackweb, good resolve at the end.
Tim
Rula
2 years 4 months ago
Dear Tim
Totally agree with you.
I can't thank you enough for your generous comment and the time you offer to read my words.
Thank you so much sir.