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Apr 24, 2013
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tomorrow came
poets final resort!
this singular site tis
of the world's best
here self styled poets
self mutually praise
double their comment
those like you and I
we finally lament.
don’t be amazed
Ii’s not like other sites
where they only praise
money you do so raise.
you have to read a lot friend
don’t leave with tears
towards the end
as tears can be discomforting too
then don't say
no one warned you
none the less
a happy innings
my new friend
to you too!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 1 month ago
Loved
Your friends will come and go
But your words will last awhile you know.
Yet we can self praise as it is good
No matter if we are not understood,
The theme needs expanding and some of the lines need attention,
Yours Ian.T
loved
12 years 1 month ago
shall as usual
pay heed
indeed