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The Eccentric poet
The Eccentric poet
Oct 20, 2020 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tonight

A sirens sounding,
My heart is pounding,
Anticipation is flowing
Through my veins.
No use fighting,
A feeling so exciting
Just let your heart take the reins..

Look into my eyes,
Don't look so surprised,
I've been watching you all night.
No time to hesitate,
Don't even speculate
Because I don't care
If it's wrong or right
tonight is the night.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Thankyou for reading xx

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Lichfield UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Oscar Wilde , Shakespeare , William Blake, Wilfred Owen, W. H Auden , Lewis Carroll , Philip Larkin

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Comments

Gracy

Gracy

4 years 9 months ago

Hello ECP, good poem. The

Hello ECP, good poem. The others have already made the same suggestions that I would have.
The title, theme and spacing are fine. No more nits. Bring on more.
Gracy