TONIGHT is NOT THE LAST

Oh !
night runs so mysteriously
gradually slowly
like the River in the darkness
silently

all sleep
none can hear it
even if it is snoring/roaring

O what a night
tonight can be
the devils are watching clearly

Is it the last night
o no no no
not at all surely

but it is just another silenced night
passing by steadily
like that last night
went

About This Poem

Last Few Words: TONIGHT is NOT THE LAST nite wear your nightie sweety

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

Sparrow 42

5 years 3 months ago

Loved

"the night" in the first line is not needed, I would prefer an Oh not just a lazy O, or o..
Otherwise quite likeable lol
Take care young one an know we do read your works ,
Yours as always Ian ...

lovedly

5 years 3 months ago

After ages Ian hope ur hopping

Oh not just a lazy O, or o..
Otherwise quite likeable lol

Sparrow 42

5 years 3 months ago

Loved

I am still watching you lol

lovedly

5 years 3 months ago

IAN and I am---- we RE

JUST 222222222222 2 GYRATE
AH I mean Great

hoz the virus in UK today

Sparrow 42

5 years 3 months ago

The virus has killed around 5000 people from a 5 year old to a 90 year old a few Doctors and nurses tending the sick it is bad in Europe and the USA is heading for a crisis, we are trying to manage the rate of cases so that our medical side is not overwhelmed and it seems to be doing the job..
You just take care and keep your head down , talk later as things progress,
Yours as always Ian ..