08/24 Too Good to be True

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Too Good To Be True

This is the life I never dreamed of.

I dreamed of a life of solitude and silence,
wandering the globe with boots and a rifle,
a family of brothers...

I never dreamed of hearing the pitter patter
of tiny feet in the morning,
dancing in the kitchen,
falling into someone's arms

I never dreamed of this life...
but maybe, I dreamed too small...

This life...
is too good to be true.

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson, Robert Frost, Allen Ginsberg, Walt Whitman , Misha Collins, John Donne

10 months 3 weeks ago

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10 months ago

We should always dream big to get our dreams fullfilled or at least a big part of it.
Thank you for sharing