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Feb 27, 2011
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TORSION
bend me with this
crimson crush
you twist me in your heady lush
I churn desired
and admonished
darkness cherish
onyx
and lash
bite the torrent
words that flow
and worship
pain that exstacy
extracts below
made me kneel
make me heal
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
pleiades
14 years 4 months ago
erotic redemption
erotic redemption
(what is wrong with me?)
i need a cigarette now.....
xx
weirdelf
14 years 4 months ago
The Rapture for the 21C!
I simply cannot flaw this, it works at so many levels.
All I can say is,
thankyou,
sir bard
pleiades
14 years 4 months ago
had to come back to this
had to come back to this
e..............it is SO good
p
Geezer
14 years 4 months ago
A bit like...
some of your older work. The darkness and sensuality, are superb ! [ecstasy]. Many levels here. ~ Gee
Kailashana2
14 years 4 months ago
the secret life.
the secret life.
Esker
14 years 4 months ago
and this is for U
how can I say
that I putter along
and then twist out of myself
leaping natural and incur
a new old self
behind the keyboard
smooth as silk
I exist on this level more then
the reserved
ahh but you all figure that out
by now
how can I read Kerouak
and others
Buckowski
Im darker then I leave
here
deeper then most
these are the spice of my
life
thank you all for visiting
and commenting here
it means so much
....