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Jan 14, 2015
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Touching the moon's
Touching the other side
of the silent
flat chested moon.
I thought the moon was a flat mirror
till the Digest struck me dumb
Naive okay straightforward idiot
the moon runs faster than does the sun
and
shows the front face only to human
and
now tis your reflection
go get the other half across the moon
soon
if you can run faster too
can you
F uuuuuuu
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
emogothgirl
10 years 6 months ago
correct me if i'm wrong
but do i detect a hint of sensuality? it feels like this poem is about discovery. a sudden realization, maybe. nice write.
mag
lovedly
10 years 6 months ago
when a poetry/poem has
when a poetry/poem has
many dimensions to it
and
so many view it so differently
then alone tis poetry!
The moon has its parallel
on the earth in a woman
who has more than one side
Now its for you to say
which one .
well you have lent a mind
to Neopoets to define
or
to the views herein refine
Your mind is divine
that's why they chose you to
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