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Tough Stuff

Six months ago
Bruce convinced me
I was enough,
enough for everything.
I accept it.
I acknowledge it.
I apply it,
on a daily basis.
He did the job so well
that I became tough,
able to endure
and rise above
the mediocre
which comes into my life.

So now I have a hard veneer
which protects me
from a negative onslaught.
I open my heart and soul
and give in to feelings
for my own benefit.
It makes me whole.
It makes me complete.
It just makes me feel good.

There are times
when negative people
slip in.
They enter
unannounced
and make their presence felt.
I ignore them.
I erase them,
because,
not only am I enough,
I am strong enough
to rub them out
and leave them where they are.

I am tough.
I am strong.
I have the power
to make good things happen.
I have a brain
which functions
with clarity and purpose
and dedication ( when required).
I am made of tough stuff.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: As a result of my therapy on 20/11/2024, six months ago, Bruce not only unlocked my emotions, with the ability to express them fully, he gave me the power to reject ( or even erase) what did not improve the quality of my daily life. This is what I call my " tough stuff". I am so clear about this. I say it with strength and power, which comes from deep inside of me.

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: VIC

Favorite Poets: Dorothea McKellar, Henry Lawson, Banjo Paterson

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The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The poem "Tough Stuff" conveys a powerful message of self-empowerment and resilience. The use of Bruce as a catalyst for the speaker's transformation adds depth to the narrative. The repetition of "enough" emphasizes the theme of self-acceptance and self-worth, which is a strong foundation for the poem. The imagery of developing a "hard veneer" to protect oneself from negativity is effective in portraying inner strength.

The poem effectively captures the idea of filtering out negative influences and focusing on personal growth and positivity. The speaker's assertion of strength and power is clear throughout the poem, creating a sense of empowerment for the reader. The use of short, impactful lines enhances the poem's overall tone and message.

One suggestion for improvement would be to explore more varied imagery or metaphors to further enhance the emotional depth of the poem. Additionally, consider refining the structure to create a more cohesive flow between stanzas. This could help strengthen the overall impact of the poem and

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