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Mar 21, 2011
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Transformation of Energy
Transformation of Energy
I don't know much,
About the nuances of poetry
But one thing is for certain,
All energy is indestructible,
For ever it’s under transformation,
My minds eye
Opens your eyes
And
My poem transforms
Into a script,
Energy continues to transform,
Bit by bit...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
mand
14 years 3 months ago
Well done Loved
I like the way you think!
Love Mand xxxxxx
loved
14 years 3 months ago
thank u mand
its been very sporting of u
loved
14 years 3 months ago
my minds eye
My Minds Eye
The cortex lies in the forehead,
This is the minds third eye.
It can see,
Visualise,
Interpret,
Generate
And
All that there is in life,
This eye alone evaluates,
This is known as
The minds third eye.
Frederick Kesner
14 years 3 months ago
if that is the idea
behind the concept of 'tame'
then even in the activity of the lions
there may be transformation to be had!
Geezer
14 years 3 months ago
Did the...
the Dachshund transform into a hotdog? LOL ~ Gee
loved
14 years 3 months ago
i like ur new concept
trans mogrification ... what ever
its a unique concept
glad u r along side with me
Geezer
14 years 3 months ago
The energy of...
the transformation of the words, made this a good one. ~ Gee