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Mar 08, 2012
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TREASURE
TESOURO
O homem quem gasta a vida
Procurando um tesouro
Perde aquêle que deixou
Atrás
Não sabendo
Eu sou os raios dourados
do sol
meus olhos lapis lazuli
e meus labios rubis de sangue vermelho
meu coração opalas puros
brilhando reflexões na luz
da minha malancolia
TREASURE
The man who spends a lifetime
Looking for a treasure,
Loses the true one he left behind
not knowing.
I am the golden rays
of the sun
my eyes lapis lazuli
and my lips of
rubies crimson blood
my heart pure opals shining
reflections in the light
of my melancholy
I am your lost treasure
About This Poem
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Comments
wesley snow
13 years 4 months ago
This is familiar.
Am I on drugs? A curious work, but I could swear I've read it somewhere before. wesley
Geremia
13 years 4 months ago
You read it here first, Wes.
You read it here first, Wes. I wrote the Portuguese and did a translation. I have an extic imagiation. The style sohould b familllar. It sugests strongly the ancient Persian poetry or the SONG FSONGS IN THE TANAK[ LD TESTAMRNT]
Geezer
13 years 4 months ago
You are...
indeed, a lost treasure. The emotion shows clearly. A little lighter tone than usual, but that is what I have been longing to see from you. ~ Gee
Geremia
13 years 4 months ago
Yes,Gee. Sometimes there is
Yes,Gee. Sometimes there is more intense emoton under a lighter face.
joe
China Blue
13 years 4 months ago
Joe
One word
Beautiful
Geremia
13 years 4 months ago
thanks, :)
thanks, :)
loved
13 years 4 months ago
No way
No way
are you a lost treasure,
you are the one found
but' 'tis sad,
most miss the secrets of treasure
you share in equal measure
with all over here..
yes with me too
I assure you...
Geremia
13 years 4 months ago
Wnderfully expressed/
Wnderfully expressed/
loved
13 years 4 months ago
Thanks a plenty
I can visibly observe
the shaking hand,
but you are an exception
dear friend and old man...
Old meaning
experienced,
O! wise one..
Nordic cloud
13 years 4 months ago
Solomon?
Solomon?
Oh I cannot translate it well enough but...
Never forget the girl you never met
for she is what you love in the one you have. (N)
Annuccia.
Geremia
13 years 4 months ago
Yes, Solomon :)
Yes, Solomon :)