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cauchy3
Dec 07, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Treat you and cure you WUJANTO

Treat you and cure you WUJANTO….
Treat by partly exposed for preventions. Treat our china tyrants acute durations by plots will need the help of his wife. First in views is he do not hope to kill his own wife.
All at once is to put away WUJANTO guns and send away all his pawns. Then by ways WUJANTO is criticize as bad as he likely had in normal.
Thus give WUJANTO a chance to miff without killing.
Final step give back WUJANTO his guns and follower men.
All a sudden and then WUJANTO wife should dare and brave to point at WUJANTO as bad as he had been. He is a tyrant and he is murder.. Doing this we hope we could cure the madness of WUJANTO. If it could not be gone we then try the other ways. WUJANTO brains may open and cut with CINGULOTOMY. WUJANTO as highest chief in china around year 2000 to 2012 and nothing yet to down should need a cure for killing madness. --------Cheung Shun Sang=Cauchy3----------

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weirdelf

weirdelf

12 years 10 months ago

I googled and wikipedia'd WUJANTO

and found nothing but some unremarkable surnames.
What the fuck is this about? Phhhhfff?

It's certainly not poetry.

Noe tell me how wrong I am, explain it, please. I fuck up in my interpretations so often I would really like you to tell me wht this is about except the piss-take of poetry I suspect it is.

I admit WUJANTO is possibly a Chinese name that doesn't translate into English

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 10 months ago

Come on

You sound like a Chinese dissident, and as Jess says this is definitely not poetry.
We are a poetry workshop here to promote the skills of poetry, most times we keep away from politics, unless the USA is having an election Lol.
Yes I understand that this maybe about Cystic Fibrosis but the operation is no cure for that, or just purely an operation carried out by undercover people as a brainwashing op (Frontal Lobotomies) but the write is still not Poetry
Please try to write something we can try to understand, Yours Yenti

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 10 months ago

Jess

if that Fuck off is directed at me, then you had better not think that you are the only one that can critique a poem, or whatever this write above is.
Then there was Jess and a quiet descended on the world.
Then Jess you quote from the Neopoet guidelines????
"Critique, don’t comment. Neopoet is primarily a workshop environment"
http://www.neopoet.com/community-guidelines..

weirdelf

weirdelf

12 years 10 months ago

it was, but you don't need to defend other people

this cause most of the problems on Neopoet, people defending other people, which is a way of attacking someone in the guise of defending someone else.

I admit my comment was harsh, and perhaps unwarranted, but let him defend himself, it is not your place.

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 10 months ago

Jess

If you read my comment I was agreeing with you, and at the same time no matter what was going on for him to write, was not poetry.
I was hoping that we could get something better from the person, Maybe I should give up, I was supporting your critique, Yours Ian.T

PS:- Lareina Wujanto, is the name of a person something to do with systic fibrosis

weirdelf

weirdelf

12 years 10 months ago

Sorry, my friend

I fell back into an earlier period of Neopoet where people attacked me by pretending to defend other people. My very bad.
Please forgive me.

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 10 months ago

Jess

I will never attack you, I will sometimes point out that your comments are a little harsh by retaliating but that is us.
Still trying to figure out what the hell this one is talking about so will leave it with you but will read the comments as they come through.
You can't upset me young Elf my love for all people is stronger than a few words, Take care Yours Ian.T