Neopoet Weekly 03/31/24 to 04/06/24

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True North

Love had made mistakes.
More than I care to mention.
So, I didn’t see you coming.

The one that stood Idly by,
waiting for me to notice
the direction on my compass
pointing right there at you.

Last Few Words: Another short poem to irritate Geez - LOL. Just messin' with you my friend - cheers!

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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1 year 2 months ago

Does she know how terribly in love you are?

you have the touch of genius that is all your own!

*hugs, Cat

1 year 2 months ago

Well, if she doesn't know by now... - LOL! I don't know about genius, but thank you Cat. Glad you liked ti one.

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1 year 2 months ago

I rather like this one. It is short and to the point.
It seems to come as some surprise and a welcome message.
Nice job! ~ Geez.
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1 year 2 months ago

Thanks Geez! Appreciate you, and always sharing your comments.

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1 year 2 months ago

Hello, Michael,
...and suddenly it all falls into place. This is a beauty.
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