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Feb 25, 2018
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tsunami, SUNKU -IRIZ WORK SHOP!
tsunami,
really does
come infrequent
pierce
eyes and see
remnants galore
await
another may
come ashore
(of syllables I ain't too sure
do assure)
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
IRiz
7 years 4 months ago
Tsunami
Tsunami
Is not funny
It is a serious truble
Be ready
To dig out
All your poetic strength
Discard all the rubble
Come out fresh
And write something tiny
Lol
lovedly
7 years 4 months ago
lol
rflol