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Oct 10, 2020
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Tulips Roses And Lilly
Those who endure
love the lure
of Life
and
having come
to mommy Earth
love to survive
years long enough
ere you naturally die
so @81 I do still try
OOOOO SOOOOO
very niceeeee poemmy
thanx for reading mine
Tulips Roses And Lilly
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 9 months ago
Keep on...
trucking, maybe you will make it to a hundred! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 9 months ago
which way should one take it
healthy
or
as a curse
frndly Gee
either way thanks to thee/ye
Geezer
4 years 9 months ago
Healthy of course...
I wouldn't curse anyone with ill health to a hundred! ~ Geez.
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lovedly
4 years 9 months ago
Hahahaha Gee
u r lovely