Twidiot

Hook line and sinker
Now a twittering stinker uses my clothes
That opinionated SOB even looks like me
Tee hee hee
He's free to cuss and fume and howl at the moon
And, brevity is a must
Trimmin' hashtags flags verbosity and
even 1 more symbol is not tolerated
The thimble only hold this much
tough to do unless I remember I can fill page 2 too
if I damn well please
Sieze the day away and talk to them!, twidiot

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Quick ditty to jump back in. Playing on the word plane plain silliness.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: SC

Favorite Poets: What Was Once the Largest Shopping Center in Northern Ohio Was Built Where There Had Been a Pond I Used to Visit Every Summer Afternoon by Mary Oliver. , Chapter Subtitle in Hardcore Zen by Brad Warner Chapter Title: If Only... Subtitle: you may find that having is not so pleasing as wanting. This is not logical but it is often true., Rumi: Tending Two Shops

Comments

Gracy

4 years 11 months ago

Hi Miserably Happy,

Hi Miserably Happy, interesting topic. It reads more like prose than poetry, but my guess is that is what you want. Not sure what you mean and to whom you're referring. Perhaps you could give me an idea.
Powerful piece, nonetheless. Best, Gracy (I prefer to call you Happy!)