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Twists and Turns

Billy Collins wrote about how long a snowflake takes
to fall to the ground. Two hours, I think it was.
All we get here is rain racing to the surface, by comparison.

I wondered if either were jealous of the other's journey.
Did the rain miss anything in its rush, or was the snowflake,
meandering along as it will, guilty of same?

All I know for certain is the wind,
which I generally have no use for,
in all its bluster usually has a say in the matter.

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Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski, Billy Collins, Ted Kooser, Haiku & Harvey Kurtzman (a visual poet, of sorts)

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Lavender

Lavender

1 month 1 week ago

Twists and Turns

I'll think of this as "Michael's Trivia." The wind truly is the Master.
Thank you!
L

Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

1 month ago

Perhaps putting up wind

Perhaps putting up wind turbines would make it practical for everyone within the grid. It blows and we turn away to refuge, at least we produce useful energy in its huffing.