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May 14, 2025
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Twists and Turns
Billy Collins wrote about how long a snowflake takes
to fall to the ground. Two hours, I think it was.
All we get here is rain racing to the surface, by comparison.
I wondered if either were jealous of the other's journey.
Did the rain miss anything in its rush, or was the snowflake,
meandering along as it will, guilty of same?
All I know for certain is the wind,
which I generally have no use for,
in all its bluster usually has a say in the matter.
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Comments
Lavender
1 month 1 week ago
Twists and Turns
I'll think of this as "Michael's Trivia." The wind truly is the Master.
Thank you!
L
Michael Anthony
1 month 1 week ago
I like it L, thank you for
I like it L, thank you for stopping by!
Best
Frederick Kesner
1 month ago
Perhaps putting up wind
Perhaps putting up wind turbines would make it practical for everyone within the grid. It blows and we turn away to refuge, at least we produce useful energy in its huffing.